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JAB APNE DHOKA DETEIN HAIN

Aaj hamnein dekha jab apne dhoka detein hain,
Jab vo kayaron ki bhanti muh fera kartein hain,
Sach ka samna karna seekhein, unse keh do,
Insaniyat nahi hai unmein, unse keh do,
Bandhutv ka nata todte ja rahein hain, unse keh do,
Besharmi ki hadein par kartein ja rahein hain, unse keh do,
Hamare sabr ki bhi ek seema hai, unse keh do,
Vo par hui to bura hoga anjaam, unse keh do,
Chori-chipe kam karna chodein, unse keh do,
Apne vivek ka sahi istemaal karein, unse keh do,
Hamara koi dushman nahi hai, unse keh do,
Dushman bhi dost hai hamara, unse keh do.


This poem was written in 2004 summers. I won't disclose as to whom I wrote this poem on but I nearly lost this poem when my mother snatched the paper and threw it in the dustbin. Thank god that the contents were still readable. I was in a fit of anger while writing this poem!

10 comments:

Unknown said...

kisne tumhee dhoka di hey??..batao mujhee...mey itnee joorrse usko ek jhaapar dungii keey......!!!! yaar,i wll b alwayz wth u...tc,bye.

VANILLA

nee said...

good attempt,
young people are faced with such situations,each experience teaches them the realities of life.
as the lines are mostly in urdu language,the words-bandhutav and vivek appear a little odd,u could use dosti and taaqat instead.

Anonymous said...

by going through the above poems i've only learnt fm u that if v try,we can achieve any ambitoin of our life so as you.thanks for inspiring me; i will always try to follow your learnings!!!

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ankit bhatia said...

@Navila

Jisne bhi diya tha maine usse maaf kar diya hai :)

ankit bhatia said...

@nee

Yes, and every situation in life is an experience for everyone.

I was in emotional mood so whatever came in my mind I penned it down. :)

Cheers!

ankit bhatia said...

@Anonymous

It's a privilege and honour for me that I could convert a soul into positive energy.

Thanks for liking :)

ankit bhatia said...

@Anonymous

Surely I am sure we poets would keep you glued to this blog now :)

 


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