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जब अपने धोका देते हैं

आज हमनें देखा जब अपने धोका देते हैं,
जब वो कायरों कि भाँती मुँह फ़ेरा करते हैं;
सच का सामना करना सीखें उनसे कह दो,
इन्सानियत नहीं है उनमे उनसे कह दो;
बन्धुत्व का नाता तोड्ते जा रहे हैं उनसे कह दो,
बेशरमी कि हदें पार करते जा रहे हैं उनसे कह दो;
हमारे सब्र की भी एक सीमा है उनसे कह दो,
वो पार हुइ तो बुरा होगा अनजाम उनसे केह दो;
चोरी छिपे काम करना छोडें उनसे कह दो,
अपने विवेक का सही इसतेमाल करें उनसे कह दो;
हमारा कोइ दुशमन नही है उनसे कह दो,
दुशमन भी दोस्त है हमारा उनसे कह दो




This poem was written in 2004 summers. I won't disclose as to whom I wrote this poem on but I nearly lost this poem when my mother snatched the paper and threw it in the dustbin. Thank god that the contents were still readable. I was in a fit of anger while writing this poem

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

thats gr8 Ankit bhai.... itne gusse mein bhi poem writing..... majaa a gayaaa

Anonymous said...

hey Ankit ur toooooooo good yaar i m very happy that i m one of the reader of this poem (meetu)

Razakrantikari said...

Ankit,
I like your views. these massage are our countries massage.aisa kuch lekho ke padosi ke akal Aa jay. Varna Juty kha kar Manega

Razakrantikari said...

Ankit,
I like your views. these massage are our countries massage.aisa kuch lekho ke padosi ke akal Aa jay. Varna Juty kha kar Manega

ankit bhatia said...

@razakrantikari

Hi, thanks for your comment, actually it was not written about our neighboring countries but for a specific person.

Anyhow regarding the meaning you deciphered I would like to say that: log ache hote hain but unke jo leaders hain woh misguide kar rahein hain aur dwesh ki bhavna faila rahe hain logon mein...

ankit bhatia said...

@Anonymous

Hey friends you should write your names too so that it is easier to recognize you all...

Unknown said...

boss not bad but not very good

ankit bhatia said...

@Meetu

Thanks for your support buddy :)

ankit bhatia said...

@Sonu

Thanks for going through the poem.

 


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