I am sorry for what I did
I forgive what you have done
The truth is I miss you
Remember all the laughs we have together
Each day I pick up the phone to call you
&& go wait I can ..........am sorry
Authored and shared by - GODSON VALENTINE
I forgive what you have done
The truth is I miss you
Remember all the laughs we have together
Each day I pick up the phone to call you
&& go wait I can ..........am sorry
Authored and shared by - GODSON VALENTINE
1 comment:
Hi Godson Valentine,
We welcome you to Poemtreasure! First of all congratulations for writing a poem that tries to convey the feelings of the heart.
To make your poem(s) even more impactful we would like to suggest you to incorporate full words instead of symbols like '&', and also try to avoid repetitive symbols such as '.....'.
We hope to see more of your work in future.
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